I know you’ve heard me say this before, but some characters are just louder than others. Each one of them is different, but some characters just keep chattering and want to tell me everything from what they had for breakfast to what they want to do next year. Loren was one of the chatty kinds.
For me, one of the hardest things about writing is keeping anything short. The original novella of Something About Loren that went in the Dirty Daddy anthology drove me crazy because I kept having to decide what they needed to do and what Loren couldn’t ramble on about.
He really didn’t appreciate having to be succinct, so he was very excited when I started to write more of their story. One of the things he was most excited to explore outside of more age play with Gordon was his friendship with Cooper from The Accidental Master series.
In the extended version of Something About Loren, you’ll get to see my funny pups playing with Loren, and they even take a trip to the Bound & Controlled club. To say that Cooper was excited would be an incredible understatement.
The extended version of Something About Loren comes out this Friday, and I can’t wait to see what you think about Loren playing with the pups and their trip to the club. If you haven’t read their short, here’s a peek at the first chapter of Something About Loren.
Sometimes it takes a loved one to point out the obvious before we see it.
Loren knows he isn’t the most grown-up adult out there—though anyone who makes educational video games for kids can’t be too boring. Most guys he’s dated haven’t understood, but Gordon does. Loren’s loving boyfriend makes him feel special and cared for…but lately something’s changed.
Maybe leaving out crayons and buying dinosaur chicken nuggets wasn’t the best way to get Loren’s attention, but it worked.
Gordon knows Loren didn’t have the most emotionally supportive childhood, but the smart, funny man has grown into an excitable, loving boyfriend. However, when Gordon connects the dots and realizes there’s more to Loren’s desire to be young at heart than meets the eye, he knows it’s time to show Loren that sometimes being a grown-up means embracing your little side.
I loved this one so much. It seemed so perfect and I loved the explorations, puppy play, the interactions…I just wish there was more of Loren and Gordon. I’d love seeing them interact more with Loren with the pups!
They’re so fun to write I think they’ll show up other places or maybe I’ll do a short for them just for fun. Thank you!
So, I had to wait for my ‘weekend’ for some uninterruptible reading time to indulge. Thank you for such a delightful visit with Loren and Gordon. My only issue? You left me wanting so much more. More Loren’s world view, more about Boris, and most definitely more about Dean. Please, please, please let Dean knock on your door loud enough and let you not be too swamped to answer. Thank you again for the great ‘feel goods’ and although a tad bit late; have a healthful and word prolific New Year.
I’m so glad you liked it. Yes lol they definitely need to show up again…maybe a short or freebie? They were so much fun to write. Thank you.
May I just say “Yay!”? So glad Loren is such a chatterbox. I had just finished rereading the original short and wishing for more. Nothing better than a New Year’s gift. Thank you, thank you.
Thank you!